Miss you,
like the deserts miss the rain.
Miss you,
like the flower miss the bee.
Miss you,
like the sunshine miss the light.
Miss you,
like the moon...the night.
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- alessandra
- Cluj Napoca, Cluj, Romania
- I let the poetry speak in my name...
like i miss the beauty of your eyes :-*
RăspundețiȘtergere-"flowers miss"/"flower misses" sg respectiv pl,nu poti zice "flower miss"
RăspundețiȘtergere-alte greseli morfosintactice minore;
In rest e o poezie frumoasa.Keep up the good work!